Mina Witteman – author | editor | teacher of creative writing

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller, episode 5

Posted on June 25, 2014

“You go ahead to the hotel. I’ll get him to bed,” Matt said. He lugged the man from the black car, bumped the door shut and patted on the roof. Only when the Uber rounded the corner, Matt searched the man’s pockets for keys. The air inside the ground floor apartment was saturated with lingering smells that hit his nose like a bowl of overcooked Brussels sprouts.

Matt lodged the man into the couch and quickly searched the place. Furniture was sparse and what was around was worn. Paint peeled off the woodwork, whitewashed walls were smudged. It was no more than two small rooms and an open plan kitchen and it breathed the atmosphere of poverty and neglect. The bedroom held a wardrobe, a mattress on the floor, and a heap of dirty laundry in a corner near the door-less en-suite, which was a mere shower stall and a sink. The shower’s sealer was stained black from mold and so were the sink’s drain and the tap. One toothbrush, toothpaste, shaving gear and an empty bottle of shampoo. That was it. The home of a single man. Matt positioned the three pinpoint cameras, two in the bedroom, one in the bathroom. That should be enough. He checked reception on his cell phone, before he moved the man from the couch to the bedroom. With two fingers, he slipped the man’s phone and wallet from the back pocket of his jeans and lowered the man onto the mattress. He flipped open the wallet and removed the cards one by one. A Dutch ID, a driver’s license, an ING bank card, and what looked like a supermarket’s loyalty card. No credit card.

Matt pocketed the cards. “I hope you ain’t too attached to your name, Jonathan Groen.” he said softly to the sleeping man at his feet.

The Dutchman moaned and turned to his side, balled up in a fetal position, his mouth slightly open.

Matt waited until the loud snores of an alcoholic filled the room, then closed the door to the bedroom.

The living room and kitchen didn’t bring any surprises. A passport was all he needed to find and he did within a few minutes. It sat on the desk in a pile of what looked like bills, most of them unopened. He took a picture of the lay-out of the envelopes over the old MacBook’s keyboard. He swept them aside and opened the laptop. The computer came to live when he touched its track pad. It took him a few seconds to hack into the Dutchman’s electronic banking account. “Jesus,” he muttered, smilingly, as he typed in the password. People had no clue what they gave away to websites and content providers. Tracking and tracing apps would quickly become as obsolete as the fax or the telex with people so willingly giving up their privacy. He dug deeper into the bank account. A couple of hundred Euros on a running account. No savings account. Nothing that indicated any source of regular income, at least not since over a year. The only unchanging spending was what seemed the rent of the apartment to a rental agency. The monthly transfers had almost depleted the account.

Before setting up a tunnel to the servers in the basement of his Palo Alto home, Matt installed spyware and tracking apps on the Dutchman’s laptop and cell phone. From now on, all internet activity of the computer would seem to come from the US. And he himself could track every single electronic movement of the Dutchman. He took out his laptop and quickly reprogrammed the microcontroller chip inside the Dutchman’s to disable the camera warning light. He checked the reception. He’d be able to spy on the Dutchman’s every move as long as he stayed in reach of the laptop’s camera. He positioned a pin-point camera in the room and one in the kitchen. He stashed a red computer bag under the desk, half-hidden in the dark.

 

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller, episode 4

Posted on June 24, 2014

It was past midnight when the bartender shouted something and started cleaning the bar. People emptied their glasses, paid their tabs and left.
“Closing time,” Matt said. He pushed his chair back and got up, watching the man, who lolled against the window. He’d been asleep for the last hour or so, but no one had seemed to bother.
“Thank God,” Victoria said. “This is worse than a fucking red-eye. I so need a drink. A real one.” She pushed her half-empty glass away from her, gathered her things and stuffed them in her handbag.
“Go order a cab and wait outside. I’ll pay and see what happens to him.”
Matt watched the snoring man from the corner of his eye. A drop of saliva trickled down his stubble. It left a glistening snail’s trail. No one seemed to worry about him. Not even the bartender. Matt slid his wallet back and pulled out his iPhone. He pretended to search for something and waited for everyone else to leave. He stepped outside when no one but the bartender and the sleeping man were left.
Victoria leaned against a mailbox across the street. He joined her. She did what she was supposed to do and wrapped her arms around his waist, tilting her head back and speaking to him softly, like they were a couple debating on where to go next, allowing Matt to keep an eye on the door. “Goddammit, Turing. If it wasn’t for the fact that your chest actually moves when you breathe, I’d say you were dead.” She pressed closer, rubbing up to him. “I know you’re not gay, but dammit, could you at least pretend?”
“It’s a business deal, V. Not a romance.” He slid away a little, just enough to open up some space between them, not enough to tick her off. “Business,” he repeated.
“Yeah, yeah, I hear you,” she said, but she pressed closer again and tightened her arms around him. “Fucking business.”

 

It took the man another ten minutes before he stumbled out. The bartender called after him, but didn’t wait for him to answer. He shut the door and pulled the curtains closed.
“Ja, ja, ja,” the man muttered. He staggered across the street, missed them by a hair and stopped at a bicycle that sat against a lamppost. He groped about in his pockets, fishing out a set of keys. The clinging sounds of a key bumping against metal, froze Victoria instantly.
“Fuck,” she whispered. “Where’s that Uber?”
“When did you order it?”
“Even before I was outside.” She checked her iPhone. “Nine minutes said the app.”
“Stupid Dutch,” Matt grumbled. “No clue about service. Go talk to him. Keep here. Or find out where he lives.”
“How?”
“Jesus, V. That’s about the one thing that you ace in, get a guy in your bed.”
“Jesus, Turing,” she hissed back. “You’re such an asshole.” She strutted over to the man. “Can I help you?” she asked. She kept chatting the man up until the Uber glided to a standstill at the corner of Prinsengracht.
Matt whistled softly through his teeth. Victoria nodded. She wrapped her arm around the man’s waist and guided him to the cab. Together they squeezed him in the back.
“Where to?” the driver asked.
Victoria nudged the man. “Where to?” she whispered, her lips almost touching his cheek.
“Antillenstraat,” the man mumbled. And something that sounded like a number.
The driver didn’t seem to have a problem with the almost inaudible directions of the man. He revved up the engine, made a U-turn and sped away from the city center. The man was fast asleep by the time they’d left the Elandsgracht.
“Did you get the number?” Matt asked the driver.
“Yes sir.” The driver repeated the number in English.
“That’s right,” Matt said. “Nine.” He sat back and tapped the address in his iPhone.
“Fucking long night,” Victoria muttered.
Matt shot her a warning look.
Victoria looked away, her face reflected in the window like an ashen blob with huge dark holes where her eyes were.

 

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller, episode 3

Posted on June 23, 2014

The bar was small, busy and dark, as if someone had switched off the sun. Guests hung around the wooden counter, obstructing the way for those who wanted to go the higher seating area in the back. The man wormed his way to the counter. Holding the copper railing with one hand, he raised the other to signal the bartender.
The bartender acknowledge him with the slightest nod and drew him a beer. “Jonathan,” he said and then something more, in Dutch, with lots of harsh g’s, before he ripped off a sheet from a small notebook and jotted something down. He placed the tab in between a dozen others on the counter.
Matt pushed Victoria past the heat and stench of people and beer, and past the man, who downed his beer in one gulp and ordered another in almost the same movement. At a table, half-hidden from the bar by a wall, Matt nudged Victoria into the chair that faced away from the bar and the man. He lowered himself into a seat facing her.
Victoria glanced over her shoulder before she bent towards him. With a quick tug, she adjusted the wig. Her cheeks were flushed with excitement. “I can’t see him. Where is he? Is he still here?” she whispered.
“He’s still here.” Matt watched the man down another glass of beer and ordering his third.
“Now what? You need me to make a move on him?”
“Not yet,” he said. “Let’s wait until he leaves again. We need to isolate him first.”
“Waiting is good.” Victoria leaned back in her chair. “Be a darling and get me a glass of Chardonnay. I’m parched.”
“No alcohol, V. Not now. I need you sharp.”
“Turing, you moron. You know I can drink a gallon and be sharper than all of these nitwits together.” She swatted the air with her hand, reducing everyone around to nothing more than flies.
She was right. She could hold her liquor like a but he kept his ground. “Too much at stake. You know that.”
She looked him straight in the eye, without blinking once.
He met her gaze with equal steadiness.
She was the first to break the eye contact. “Dammit, Turing,” she snorted. She swept her hair back. “Get me a fucking iced tea.”

 

The man didn’t leave. Instead, he nestled on a barstool near the window and drank. The light outside died. Street lamps flickered to life. People left. People came in, left again. And all the time the man stayed put. Four hours went by. Five. Six. Seven. Eight hours of solid drinking. Victoria had given up glancing over her shoulder. She drank her iced teas with noticeable disgust and flicked back and forth between Twitter, Facebook and Google+ on her iPad, throwing messages about nothing at her 50K followers, while Matt silently registered and memorized every little move the man made, every gesture, every motion. From the way he closed his eyes when he drank to the nervous rubbing of his left hand over his upper leg, to the twitch of the right corner of his mouth that accompanied every order for more beer.

 

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller, episode 2

Posted on June 22, 2014

Matt followed her nod with his gaze, to the man who trudged his way through the shoppers. Every now and again he looked up and when he did Matt caught a glance of his eyes. The cold shiver turned into an electrical surge that opened his throat and windpipe. As if he looked in a mirror before he’d put on the gray lenses. He stepped back into a shop’s portico, but pushed Victoria towards the man. “Do your magic,” he said softly. “Make it happen.”

Victoria stopped the man. She put her hand on his arm with a possessiveness that made him stop. She asked him for the way to the Anne Frank House. For a moment it looked as if the man wanted to ignore her, move on, but after a short hesitation in which his eyes flit nervously right and left, he answered her. In English. In flawless American English with a hint of Mid-West mixed in with a very, very distant Dutch twist. Victoria kept firing questions at the man, giving Matt ample opportunity to study him. He was so close that he could almost touch him. Not that he wanted to. The man reeked of old sweat and unwashed clothes, of thin beer. His hair was greasy and unkempt. But the right color. A grubby white Tee stretched around the onset of a potbelly, even though he couldn’t be older than twenty five. Matt’s age. Homeless? Matt cast a glance at the worn backpack that dangled from the man’s shoulder. That would be even easier. Nobody would miss a homeless man.

“Thank you.” Victoria gave the man her widest smile. She tucked a strand of black wig hair behind her ear. The man returned her smile with the mechanical one of a waiter hunting for a tip. Then he nodded and pushed on through the crowd.

Matt stepped out of the portico and stared at the man’s back.

Victoria seized his arm. Her blood-red nails dug into his skin, cut through the layer of dried sweat. “That’s him,” she whispered, her voice low and urgent. “We’ve got him. We so got him.”

Matt shook her hand off. “Maybe,” he muttered under his breath. He silenced her with an impatient wave of his hand. The man moved away slowly. Ten feet. Fifteen feet. Heads popped up in between them, bobbed by. Other heads appeared, moved in and out of sight. When he could spot nothing more than the man’s bed hair, Matt started moving.

The man plodded his way through the narrow street. He crossed the bridge over the canal. Which one? Matt pictured a map: Dam Square and the canals around it in a half circle: Singel, Herengracht, Keizersgracht and this was the last one, Prinsengracht. The man took a left turn, crossed the street diagonally and disappeared into a bar. ‘De Eland’ said the white lettering on the window. Not a homeless guy. A homeless would buy his beers in a cheap supermarket.

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller, episode 1

Posted on June 21, 2014

Matt let his gaze travel up the seventeenth-century gables to the Californian-blue sky hovering over the narrow shopping street that connected two canals. He tried to close his ears to Victoria’s incessant yapping about how she loved Amsterdam and how she loved the hot weather even if it was only May. Her every sentence started with an Oh My God, lined with ear-piercing cries of amazement. Matt hid his balled fists in his pockets. Why had he let her talk him into going after a bloody Dutchman and not an American? They could’ve found someone in Silicon Valley. The Bay area was overpopulated with losers. He shouldn’t have let her persuade him to walk heads in this crowded and cramped city. It imprisoned him, kept him from breathing. Even the strip of blue sky couldn’t open up his windpipe wide enough to give his lungs the oxygen he so desperately longed for. Worse even, the longer he looked up, the more the gables seemed to lean over, as if they’d cave in any moment and bury him under a heap of brick and dirt. After four days, he wanted nothing more than return to vast emptiness of the US, back to the indifference of Americans who knew how to leave you alone.

He directed his attention back to the woman next to him. Blond and dumb was how people tagged her. But most people never bothered to look any further than the slick outside and the grin chiseled on her face. He’d type her as sharp and cunning. Zealous and avaricious, too. Her petite figure hid her age well. She could be fifteen. She could be twenty five. He knew she was well in her thirties. He also knew that she’d do anything for money, because hard cash was the one thing that could push her best-before date forward.

Victoria hadn’t lifted her hand off his arm since they’d left the hotel on Dam Square. Every few steps he stifled the impulse to shake her off. It wasn’t the possessiveness of the gesture that needled him, a gesture that lured the world into thinking they belonged together, or that she had some sort of power over him. He could live with that. What drove him insane was the actual physical contact. The feeling of her skin on his, the irritation of sweat building up in between, sweat that would dry if she’d lift her hand, leaving a film of salt on his arm. As if a layer of sticky earth covered him. He drew in a deep breath to suppress the cold shiver that ran from his wrist to his armpit. They circled a group of girls, who were squealing at a shop window. Victoria stopped and squealed along. A few more weeks. A few more weeks and he could get rid of her. A few more weeks and he could get rid of the overpowering feeling of being buried alive.

“Let’s go back to the hotel, V,” he said, ignoring her exalted cries. “This ain’t gonna work.”

She whipped around. “Perseverance, Turing,” she said, without a moment’s pause, almost as if she’d expected him to give up. “All we need is one douche that fits the profile. One loser. All we have to do is find him, set him up and cash the money.” She peered past him, away from the sun that cast a glow of molten gold over trees and houses, and spied the street behind them. “What about him?” Her hand slid from his arm and moved to his waist. She pulled him closer, slightly turning him, her powdered cheek brushing his biceps. “That’s him,” she whispered. The urgency in her voice set his teeth on edge. “Dammit, Turing, that’s him.”

 

 

 

 

Daily Distraction: DARK FIBER – a serial thriller

Posted on June 20, 2014

digital data flow through optical wire

Don’t worry! I’m not going all technical on you, but I am an author closely connected to the nether regions of the Internet and sometimes I get my inspiration from something as mundane as a dark fiber.

What is dark fiber? I hear you ask.

Actually, it’s two things and I’ll give you the – more or less – technical one first: Dark fiber is unused optical fiber that has been laid but is not currently being used in fiber-optic communications, like the Internet. Because fiber-optic cable transmits information in the form of light pulses, a dark cable refers to one through which light pulses are not – yet – being transmitted. There are millions of miles of dark fiber across the world, waiting to be lighted and used to bring us cable TV, telephone or the Internet.

Now my definition of dark fiber:

DARK FIBER is a techno thriller, set in the heart of the Internet where techies control our lives, where we are tapped and peeped at, and where our every move is watched by secret services and by Internet companies, but also by individuals who know their way round in the catacombs of the Internet. One of those techies is Matt Turing, who has his own reasons to zap off the map. Matt has laid the dark fiber for his plan to disappear and all he needs is a numbskull to light it. Jonathan Groen, a former journalist-trainee-turned-bum, seems the perfect dufus and Matt worms his way into Jonathan’s life like a virus, deleting him bit by bit.
But Matt’s machinations wake Jonathan from his lethargy, rekindling his journalistic instincts. Jonathan dives into Matt’s past and presence, determined to find out the truth, and only time will tell if he is fast enough to save his own life.

So, what’s the deal?

I will give you this gruesome story in a feuilleton. From now on you can distract yourself daily with DARK FIBER. Stay tuned for the first episode, which will air tomorrow…

Daily Distraction: Delusion of the Fury

Posted on June 11, 2014

Where to start with this distraction? A national newspaper called Delusion of the Fury virtuoso, fun, wildly imaginative and enchanting, a triumph of music theatre. I’d like to add: the ultimate shot in the arm.
Delusion of the Fury is a series of soundscapes brought to the audience by an outlandish collection of musical instruments, designed and built by a man who let his imagination run free. It blends a Japanese story of a murderer who confronts the ghost of his victim with an African comedy involving a goatherd and a deaf tramp.

During the performance of this extraordinary piece, the story of my next YA novel unfolded. Harry Partch, the composer, developed his own tonal system based on intonation, in which every octave consisted not of 12 equal intervals – as on a modern piano – but 43 small intervals of differing sizes. Partch’s unconventional use of microtones not only opened a doorway to my brain and ignited my imagination, it blew life and death into my story. I will start writing tomorrow.

 

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